Amazing Grace - Chapter Eight
Glory be, it's been so long since I had something to post, my heart is pounding in my chest as I go to put this up. I'd forgotten how the adrenaline (or fear) kicks in. If you have totally forgotten...
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They didnt have the same father, but yeah theyre twins.Just like Heath and Charley. Missed this story. Thanks for bringing it back.
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As someone said earlier, this WAS just beautiful, Lynn- the whole thing!!!! Yeah, you should definitely get writer's block more often!!!!!! No wonder, though, that Heath would defend Charley to the...
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So glad to see you back, Lynn, and with such a quiet but moving chapter. Heath acting as storyteller to bring Charley's "soul back to earth", and the tale of Pollox and Castor - great choice. This one...
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Quick check before shutting down for the night and I could not believe my weary eyes. She's BACK!WOW! Each one of your chapters (now numbering nine) can stand alone as a compelling and moving story of...
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Lovely comparison between Castor and Pollux and heath and Charley
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You have such a wonderfully poetic way of writing I was transported to where the boys were, felt as if somehow I was a part of it. I particularly loved this passage. Charley won't leave Heath, not yet...
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Beautiful, beautiful chapter Lynn, so atmospheric and compelling...I loved the story of the twins, the brothers, and I deeply hope that both Heath and Charley make it home together, wherever that may...
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Lynn, I've been watching for this chapter for a long time! It was worth the wait.I love the way you engaged all the senses. The sights, sounds, scents, and textures make the scene incredibly vivid....
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Lynn, that was breathtakingly beautiful. You show us the depth of the bond between Heath and Charley in every line and they way these two gallant young men nurture each other is truly heartwarming....
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Lynn, I just loved this chapter! Heath and Charlie are Castor and Pollux and will be brothers for all etenity. I'm guessing that Charlie has no home to go to and his home is now Heath's home. I'm...
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Such a beautiful chapter! I felt as though I were there with them looking at the stars. I'm looking forward to the boys finally getting HOME. What a nice word!CASEY
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Very Nice. I have to go back and read earlier chapter that I missed. The boys are very sweet. Wish they would get some help.
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Glad to see this story back! I love the support Heath and Charley give each other.Home.Such a short word. Such a powerful word. He longed for home so much surely Charley did too. Maybe home was...
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That was gorgeous, from the autumn to the winter frost, from the checking of the rocks for cracks to keep Charley safe and in the present, to the reverence for the word Home. Wow!(That paragraph was...
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Lynn:Well, I wish for writer's block, then, too, if it will make me write as well as you!! Powerful chapter - and very nicely done. I love the ending, for home is never a physical place as far as I'm...
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Lynnie,Sorry I did not get to this sooner, but the show finally opened last night and I am trying to catch up on my reading and chatting! What an interesting idea to intertwine the myths and legends...
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